3rd week of news review.....
1) incomeshield policyholders will get some help from the insurer to cope with premium increases. From december 1, medishiled premuims have been adjusted to mathc an increase in benefits for singaporeans.NTUC incomeshiled premuims went up by an average of less than $2.50 a month. income is launching a $6 million assiatance scheme to help lower income and elderly patients whose finances are affected by the economic downturn.existing incomeshield policyholders below 61 years old will have their monthly premuim increase capped at $5 or $10 , depending on the wards their plans are pegged to.
my opinion: i felt that its good that incomeshiled is helping the less fortunate and the elderly patients because they might have enough money to pay up the monthly income especially now that the economic is getting bad.also the monthly premuim increases of $5 or $10 to the elderly is good because they helped them to minimize there expenditure this coming christmas.i hoped that this will benefit the poorer citizen and the elderly for this cominng christmas that almost some toys or things that they were selling now is higher because of the economic and financial crisis.it minimizes the expenditure of the poorer people.
2)The hotels in Singapore have ramped up their security measures since the terrorist attack in Mumbai. The terrorist attack has caused a death of a Singaporean, who was kidnapped by the terrorists. Now, the hotels in Singapore have tightened up their security so as to ensure that such terrorist attacks would not take place in Singapore. The staffs of the hotel are also trained to deal with chemical attacks like bomb and also to deal with other critical situation. The terrorist attack in Mumbai would always serve as a painful reminder to Singapore as well as other countries and to raise awareness to citizens.
my opinion: i felt that its good to have the idea of tightening up the security of the top hotels in singapore so if there is one time that terrorists might attack these hotels they can prevent it from happening and save the precious lives of those in the hotel like tourists from all over the world.i felt sad or that singaporean who died in mumbai. its also very good to train the staffs for this kind of situation. i also learnt that everyone all over the world to be vigilant and very alert to those what is happening around them bacuse we dont know when is those terrorists going to attack places.
my opinion: i felt that its good that incomeshiled is helping the less fortunate and the elderly patients because they might have enough money to pay up the monthly income especially now that the economic is getting bad.also the monthly premuim increases of $5 or $10 to the elderly is good because they helped them to minimize there expenditure this coming christmas.i hoped that this will benefit the poorer citizen and the elderly for this cominng christmas that almost some toys or things that they were selling now is higher because of the economic and financial crisis.it minimizes the expenditure of the poorer people.
2)The hotels in Singapore have ramped up their security measures since the terrorist attack in Mumbai. The terrorist attack has caused a death of a Singaporean, who was kidnapped by the terrorists. Now, the hotels in Singapore have tightened up their security so as to ensure that such terrorist attacks would not take place in Singapore. The staffs of the hotel are also trained to deal with chemical attacks like bomb and also to deal with other critical situation. The terrorist attack in Mumbai would always serve as a painful reminder to Singapore as well as other countries and to raise awareness to citizens.
my opinion: i felt that its good to have the idea of tightening up the security of the top hotels in singapore so if there is one time that terrorists might attack these hotels they can prevent it from happening and save the precious lives of those in the hotel like tourists from all over the world.i felt sad or that singaporean who died in mumbai. its also very good to train the staffs for this kind of situation. i also learnt that everyone all over the world to be vigilant and very alert to those what is happening around them bacuse we dont know when is those terrorists going to attack places.
5 Comments:
At December 16, 2008 at 11:39 PM , tsooc said...
Dear Riz,
1) This may not be an appropriate piece of news for you to comment on since you do not really understand this article and you would most probably find your opinions limited. In this article, you have to bring in social responsibility of NTUC. Being an insurer, what type of responsiblities do you think they owe to the public?
2) I really like the opinions you have written for this piece of news. You can also take note of your sentence structure and aim to write clearly. From your sentence structure, I have the impression that you have not been reading English books for some time. Why don't you rewrite your views here as a form of correction for sentence structure. Always read through again before posting. chox me when you are done. Keep up your efforts.
At December 18, 2008 at 7:33 PM , ♥RiZ_2627♥ said...
1)i think the insurer have a reponsibility of keeping the insurance in line because the people in that particular insurance is trusting them to keep their money until they retired so it will be worse if that particular insurance is out of business and the people insuring there will not get the money they were saving for their future expenditures.
2)sorry...because i didnt check what i have wrote...
corrections:
tightening the security of hotels is good in a way that it keeps the people staying there safe and sound.training the staffs in different situations will help the whole hotel to prevent such attacks, even if how the terrorists can attack they can prevent it in different ways.being vigilant and alertive is good to be aware of the surroundings around us because we dont know when are those terrorists going to attack places.
At December 18, 2008 at 11:31 PM , tsooc said...
Dear Riz,
1) What do you mean by ' keeping the insurance in line'? Do you mean stay in business and ensure that they will not go bankrupt?
2) This paragraph is really better. Keep it up. Here is my edited version (Compare it with yours for errors)
Tightening the security of hotels is good as it will keep the people staying there safe. Training the staffs on what to do during different situations will help to ensure the safety of the guests. Even if terrorists do attack them, they will be able to prevent it in different ways. Despite all these measures, nothing beats being vigilant and alert, as we don't know when terrorists are going to strike next.
At January 3, 2009 at 10:01 PM , ♥RiZ_2627♥ said...
1)yeah...i just forgot how to phrase it that way...
At January 3, 2009 at 10:03 PM , ♥RiZ_2627♥ said...
2)the second edited of yours miss tan is better and i will try to do like that also...
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